3.+Transformation+of+journalism+modern+communicationmass+media+proscons


 * Rough Draft**

In almost every houses, there is at least one media source. Laptops, cellphones, radio, TV are some examples of daily media people use today. While having all these sources, we need to ask ourselves if we can rely on them completely. The problem with the world today regarding the impact of mass media depicts people’s gullibility. Despite the fact that media can be deceiving at times, people do not try to reason the information from the internet. Even when people view wrong information shown on the media, they tend to spread those information out loud to others. An example of this foolish act is spreading rumors. Rather unintelligent, many people can not judge to themselves what is to be announced and not announced. Mass media disables many from developing the judgement skills, which is a deadly problem present in many people who utilize media in their lives today. On the other hand, mass media certainly paves the way closer to globalization. People shop, chat, read, learn, and etc. on internet. And because many different attributes from all over the world can interact easily now thanks to the advanced media, people share more common interests and feel more bonded to each other. Twitter or Facebook provide people with instant newsfeed or information. The most recent and the biggest news on twitter showed some pictures of ruined houses due to the typhoon in Seoul, Korea. It is amazing how fast these news come up on twitter or on TV. The main purpose of these updates is to inform the people from every parts of the world. Before, many people were indifferent about news on other countries, however, these days, people pay more attention to what goes around in other nations, meaning the world had become more global than it was before. One of the reasons why people concern more about other countries today present the idea of global economy. Mass media has become part of the economy and influenced its customers and joined strongly with the process. Mass media provides unlimited information, and it is people’s responsibility to value them substantially or not. If people were to judge correctly every time they encounter new information, the world would be a world we can not imagine today. There are so many false knowledge people know of and that will not change for a long time, however, if people start making right choices and neglect wrong information, the world would depict beneficial globalization.


 * 1st Revision**

Jessica Chang **(title?)** In almost every ho**me**, there is at least one media source. Laptops, cellphones, radio**s**, **and televisions** **(keep it parallel)** are some examples of media people use today. **Even w**hile having all these sources, we need to ask ourselves if we can rely on them completely. The problem with the world today regarding the impact of mass media depicts people’s gullibility. Despite the fact that media can be deceiving at times, people do not try to reason the information from the media **I**nternet. **Sometimes** when people view **faulty** information shown on the media, they tend to spread those information to others. **(**An example of this foolish act is spreading rumors. Rather unintelligent, many people can not judge to themselves what is to be announced and not announced.**-> maybe connect how rumors are a result of mass media, and not mention them as unintelligent, but rather incapable of analysis/ignorant**) Mass media disables many from developing the **analyzing skills**, which is a deadly problem present in many people who utilize media in their lives today. On the other hand, mass media certainly paves the way closer to globalization. People shop, chat, read, learn, and etc. **(don’t use etc)** on **the I**nternet. And because many different attributes **(people?)** from all over the world can interact easily now thanks to the advanced media, people **are able to** share more common interests and feel more bonded to **one** **an**other. Twitter or Facebook provide people with instant newsfeed or information. The most recent news on **T**witter showed some pictures of ruined houses due to the typhoon in Seoul, Korea. It is amazing how fast these news come up on **T**witter or on TV. These updates inform the people from every part of the world. Before, many people were indifferent about news **i**n other countries**;** however, **nowa**days, people pay more attention to what goes around in other nations. **T**he world had become more global than it was before. **(smoother transition into the economy part)** One of the reasons why people concern more about other countries today present the idea of global economy. Mass media has become part of the economy and influenced its customers **to join** strongly with the process. Mass media provides unlimited information, and it is **the individual**’s responsibility to value them substantially or not. If people were to judge correctly every time they encounter new information, the world would be a world we can not imagine today. There **is** so many false knowledge **given out by mass media that** people know of and that will not change for a long time. **H**owever, if people start making right choices and neglect wrong information, the world would depict beneficial globalization**(reword this sentence, maybe making right choices + choosing to neglect wrong info)**.

**2nd Revision**

**Final**